[L][S] The Avenger's roleplay

A well-dressed guy makes his way to the ring as his theme song plays while the crowd is wondering who could be this elegant man.

The Avenger: *hesitant*...Hello everyone...I'm glad to meet you...Well, you see I'm new here and I came to this ring to introduce myself.*Sigh* Well, my name is The Avenger.

As The avenger seems very nervous, the crowd begin to gently cheer him.

The Avenger: *Smiling*..Well, thank you, I appreciate....I'm very happy of being here at Wow, being in this arena,* Sigh* being with you. You see, I've dreamed of being a wrestler since I was a little boy and...* Sigh*..and today, my dream has finally come true.

The crowd cheers him louder than before whereas The Avenger looks in the direction of the locker room for a long time.

The Avenger: Oh *expletives deleted* , I've had enough of this comedy. Mr Infamous told me, ordered me to come here and talk with you so that we could be friends and that you could help me to climb WOW steps faster... But the truth is that I don't need you! And quite frankly, I don't care of you! I don't care what you think! I don't care what you think of me! And I don't care if you cheer me or boo me, it meant nothing to me!

Surprised, the crowd begin to boo him

The Avenger: (ironic) Oh, my god! They're booing me! Oh, maybe I should just go and kill myself, don't you think?! Yeah, that's the way I'm gonna do it! I'm going to go back to the locker room and kill myself because the crowd was booing me!

The crowd stop the booing, even more surprise, while The Avenger come toward to the edge of the ring.

The Avenger: (Serious) Sounds annoying, isn't it?

Someone in the crowd exclaims: “We don't care of you, too!”. The Avenger then descends the ring and quarrels with the fan.

The Avenger: You don't care about me, really!? So I don't care about you and you don't care about me and everyone is happy! You think that's the way we're gonna do it ? Are you kidding me ?! I can ignore you but you can't just ignore me! I'm the shining star of this company! (calm down)You can hate me, that don't matter. You can boo me, that don't matter. But you cannot not admire me! I'm the one you've dreamed to be! I'm a star whereas you, you're….nobody. All the worlds will soon acknowledge me whereas nobody will remember what you've done. Dude I managed my life, you've missed yours.

The fan, furious, tries to hit The Avenger but he dodges and goes back to the locker room, while security members enter the arena to make sure that there's no intrusion..

lmao awesome rp

O.o Really ?!

Seriously, good RP.

Your change of attitude surprised people.
Hope you can surprise people more in your future RPs too

I loved the begining, but the ending not so much (sorry), at the start i was expecting something more bigger in the ending. Maybe start talking trash to a kid in the audience until the security escorts him out of the arena, that could made more impact. But thats just how i would do it, because if you go heel you go all out heel.

I actually liked this Rp. I'm scrolling all the RP's in the forums attempting to find things wrong with them so I can give advise and all that shit, but this was impressive. Keep up the good work. I'm glad your apart your apart of the WoW team.

>Lu Bu
>Infamous

Thank you both for the compliments

>Rapper

Thanks for the advice. So, I wrote another trial, which one do you think is the best?
I can not decide.

You can actually edit it on the original post your posted up there lol.
However, well done.

I think he just made another one so we could compare both of them and tell who's better. As i myself incouraged you to try a rp a little more twisted, i like the 2nd one better. I gues it's just depends on the taste of the reader.

After a long, long thought, I've decided to choose the second one.
(I edit it in the first post to avoid mistakes)